Sensory Details






The moment you stand it makes me feel a little bit goosey however when you laugh its like there is no tomorrow that puts a smile on my face even just for a moment. Your stentorian voice when I say something wrong is what I don't want to hear because I often hear it at home. Your chubby and fluffy body  makes me want to hug you tightly. The way you put make-up on your face makes you look young and fresh. Every word that you speak out is a word of wisdom for me.
                                 
                                - EGCA (10)

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